After completing the rough draft of my proposal, which was a simple outline of what content I want to add in my final draft, I got some helpful feedback. The feedback given regarded my research questions and research methods section. My peer reviewer said that I have a great start for my final draft, but I do have a few plans for revising. First, I want to move my extensive literature review into my final draft. My literature review has some feedback from my professor, so once I make some corrections and adjustments, I will be able to add it into my final draft. I also plan on moving my introduction from my literature review to the very beginning of my proposal and then creating a new introduction for my literature review that specifies the layout of what readers can expect before reading the review. Next, and most important, I want to add more of a rhetorical analysis. By adding a specific rhetorical theory when looking at case briefs, the audience will get more of the PTW emphasis feel to my proposal. With these edits, and the other minor grammatical edits I plan on making throughout my paper, I believe I am on the right track! Plus, it will go right along with my current capstone research!
I think this is a good approach, Christina. I found the comments left by my peer reviewer to be really helpful, and I think you'll be pleased to see how seamlessly the literature review fits into the paper once it's implemented. Thanks for sharing!
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